Brevity

Haiku are even shorter than tanka, though in some ways they are easier to compose. Herewith, two versions of a haiku moment, both in draft form.

I began a longer piece this morning but could not complete it…maybe tomorrow…or another day.

~

bluebird on fence post
tree frogs calling–
insects have wakened

~~

bright bluebird
under overcast sky
an April day

~

 

Eastern Bluebird-4299_Laurie Lawler_Texas_2013_GBBC_KK

Eastern bluebird photo thanks to Photo: Laurie Lawler/Great Backyard Bird Count Participant, Audubon Society website.
 

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